Not sure about the voice though... Also I think you need a new shorter url, it's not very catchy right now. People will not find your dog clothes from seeing your commercial.
Also not sure if it's a good thing to show other company logos in your commercial; hamburger- and pizza-places.
I think it's funny, looks fine.
The voice indeed doesn't seem to be fitting.
Actually I think a womans voice could be better fitted.
when i read the punch line i LITERALLY lol'ed!! (and that was without sound) Good effort!!!