Haha.
Not sure about the voice though... Also I think you need a new shorter url, it's not very catchy right now. People will not find your dog clothes from seeing your commercial.
Also not sure if it's a good thing to show other company logos in your commercial; hamburger- and pizza-places.
I think it's funny, looks fine.
The voice indeed doesn't seem to be fitting.
Actually I think a womans voice could be better fitted.
when i read the punch line i LITERALLY lol'ed!! (and that was without sound) Good effort!!!

Hi,
Thanks for your response! totally agree with you.
The commercial could have been done alot better.
The dog clothes company is fake though.
Just liked the idea so much I had to do it. :)
-R